Mine begins with readers meeting Malachi "Mal" Dunbar who is a mechanic with the handicap of a mangled left hand he injured as a teenager but has managed to overcome and excel in his trade. When his secret crush and hero comes into the garage where he works with a problem, Mal has a chance to show his skills and soon to provide some really valuable help to the man of his dreams, rancher Dan Winslow. Who knows where this is going to go!
I'll give you a pre-edit excerpt in a minute. Here is the cover, which I think is just great! But man, that is one big tool, huh?! Wink, wink, nudge, nudge!! I have been a helper and go-fer to several mechanics who were key people in my life and would say that is about a 2" or larger combo wrench and would be used mostly on heavy equipment or a really big truck but it is a nice prop here with some suggestive implications. This man knows tools and how to use them! More details soon so stay tuned!
Excerpt:
Early spring
Malachi Dunbar deftly twisted the
wrench to secure the wheel bearing he had just installed on a customer’s
pickup. Few who saw him with his tragically deformed left hand would imagine
how skilled and capable he was at his chosen trade of auto mechanic.
Determination, perseverance and creative use of the abilities one had could
take a person a long way. Especially if you pursued your goal with dogged persistence
and never took no for an answer, not even your own personal nos.
When he heard a noise outside the
bay of the garage where he worked, Mal wriggled out from under the truck and
went to investigate. Normally he left dealing with customers to his boss, but
Ben was out this afternoon, taking his very pregnant wife to the doctor. It was
an excuse even Mal could not argue with, so he’d agreed to mind the store as
well as carry on with his normal work.
When he saw who stood just inside
the door of the office and parts store section he rued his acceptance. There
stood the last person he wanted to see and deal with. Hero, and subject of both
envy and passionate longing, Daniel Winslow probably didn’t know Mal existed.
Why should he? Heir to the largest and most successful ranch in the area, he
always appearing cool, collected and in control. Dan gave the impression he had
the world on the end of his lasso, branded and ear notched with the Flying W’s
marks.
Still, Dan looked decidedly anxious
and troubled, if the expression on his face was a valid clue. Mal wasn’t quite
sure if he was seeing anger, worry, sadness or a mixture of all three on his
idol’s face but he did recognize he’d have to deal with Dan, whatever it was.
He cleared his throat, trying to
find his voice somewhere down behind his breast bone. For a few seconds words
absolutely refused to come. Finally he managed to croak a facsimile of, “Can I
help you with something, Mr. Winslow?”
Dan wheeled toward him. “Er, is Ben
around?”
Mal shook his head. “Nope, sorry.
He had some business in Los Mercados. Won’t be back in until tomorrow morning.”
Dan growled what sounded like a
muffled cuss word. Then he gave a half-irritated shrug. “Okay, then. I know you
do the work anyway, at least most of the time. If I leave the pickup, can you
check it out? The brakes seem to be going. I really don’t want to drive it
another yard until someone can determine what’s going on. My foreman’ll be
along in a few minutes to take me home so I don’t need a loaner.”
Mal managed not to stutter or show
a tenth of the feelings roiling through him. Although Dan stood not an arm’s
length away, he’d better not do anything stupid. Instead he turned toward the
cluttered desk where Ben did the paperwork for the shop.
“Sure, you can leave the truck. I
wouldn’t want to drive up or down Alamo
Canyon Road with iffy brakes myself. Let me write
out a work order for you.” Finding the right pad of forms and a pen took enough
attention that he regained some focus so his good hand only shook a little as
he filled out the information. Then he gave the pad to Dan, careful not to
touch the other man’s hand.
“I’ll need you to sign this and
then I’ll give you a copy to keep while we work on your truck. Not that it
isn’t immediately recognizable as yours. Everyone knows the Flying W brand and
this particular Silverado, at least everyone in Copper Canyon .”
Dan scrawled his name across the
line and handed the pad back. “Thanks. Do you want to me to call Ben in the
morning or can you explain to him?”
“I’ll take care of it unless you
feel a need to speak to him,” Mal said. “You’re a regular customer so I doubt
he’ll have any questions but he can call if he needs to.”
“All right.” Dan nodded. “Good.
Thanks.” The single toot of a horn apparently alerted him that his ride had
arrived. He spun and started toward the door. Mal stood and watched as the other
man headed for a pickup, a much dustier,
older and well-worn one than the shiny blue and white Silverado he left behind.
He had to admire the horseman’s trim ass, set off by a snug pair of Wranglers,
as he lifted a leg to climb into the cab.
Dan—make that Mr. Winslow—was one
good looking guy. Chocolate colored hair that curled a bit behind his ears and
along the edge of a silver-gray Stetson, a matching mustache, and the greenest
eyes Mal had ever seen. Almost too pretty but all man despite his looks.
Well
of all the fucking luck. I hope I handled that okay. I know Winslow is a regular
customer and kind of a pal of Ben’s from way back. At least he didn’t make a
comment about my hand or whether or not I could do the work. Maybe he didn’t
notice it or even care.
He exhaled a ragged half-sigh as he
went to open the door on the garage’s empty bay. Then he carefully drove the
Silverado in and set the emergency brake. A few minutes later, after securing
the braces under the pickup, he manipulated the hydraulic lift to raise the
truck. He locked it down high enough he could stand underneath to examine the
lines and the rest of the brake system. The truck was only a few months old, so
a sudden failure seemed peculiar, even downright unlikely. Mal had to wonder
what was going on, what he’d discover.
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